egh...
Not more stick battles!
egh...
Not more stick battles!
It's RHG, Sticks Only.
Short and sweet
Though lacks in story and dialogue, this really shows that you can indeed animate and not post up a bunch of motion tweens of copied content.
it's been done
...too many times on newgrounds.
For the sake of saving yourself the embarrassment of harassing the newgrounds community with terrible content, submit a more involved project.
Do not be surprised or impatient if a good project in mind takes more than a few weeks if not months.
I uploading it without any bad intention, sorry for my english xd
Short and sweet
...no pun intended.
Though was expecting more from a contest entry.
Mine was one of the longer entries funnily enough.
I was surprized...
I originally thought this was another crappy flash made by an 11 year old that I was seconds away from blamming. Then I saw a decent moral behind it...
Though short and sweet, it lacks in luster that is in art and dialogue. But that's my only negative criticisms about this flash. Otherwise, good work!
There's always room for improvement.
eegh...!
Though decent cartoon animation, the overlapping audio makes this hard to follow.
Credit for effort
But that's all I can give you...
Preloader is difficult to navigate, unsure on whether that cat was the movie or the play button.
Video was too short, not a lot of effort put into it but you still get credit for some effort nonetheless.
I suggest a longer, more involved flash. Don't be frightened by working on it for long spans of time. You'll know you're ready to submit when you know there's nothing more you can do to it.
thank you!
Indeed
A good moral to stand by with your flatmates... roommates, what have you.
Good vid mate!
Thanx!:D
This animation...
...certainly defines epic. Which couldn't be spelled better without an explosive crescendo. Mad Props.
Another stick fight...
...that rocks, slightly.
Though well animated, would play off with a larger resolution, different (uncopyrighted) soundtrack, sound effects, and perhaps some dialogue.
Newgrounds has seen it's fair share of stick figure animations, so this isn't going to stand out to much.
i dissagree but still thanks for the review
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