mohawkade's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deliverance ep. 2]

Good animation...

Will suggest using the occasional motion tween with your lip syncing for a more fluid look, and maybe lowering the sensitivity of your microphone then increasing the volume in post-production to minimize the buzzing. If subtitles weren't in place, this movie would've been hard to follow.

Otherwise, I'm always ecstatic to see an decently animated movie with unique dialogue!

PParreira responds:

yeah I know, Anya's voice clips (girl in purple) were a bit too loud for the mic to handle, buit asked my voice actress to take it easy so that the same mistake wont happen.

[Megatron vs Starscream]

Ah Stop Motion...

Though kinda cheesy and I imagine the dialogue is from an old cartoon. I do appreciate a good stop-motion animation, in some ways it is much more challenging and time consuming than a flash.

Boomation responds:

I've practiced with Flash before and in my opinion, they're about as difficult to make as one another, just stop-motion is a little more time consuming. Thanks for the review!

[Dance Mat - Stop-motion]

A refreshing animation

My only negative criticism about this is that it could use a preloader, otherwise this was very well done!

KERRUPT responds:

Hi mohawkade. Unfortuantely as a stop-motion animator I'm not really very familiar with Flash and struggled to trying to put a preloader in. Will be looking into it again today though and will hopefully figure it out in time for my next submission. Thanks for the feedback though and the positive review - it's greatly appreciated. :o)

[Relationships]

GoAnimate...

...is a program for talentless, unimaginative slobs.

M18 responds:

And you are whats known as a dick, besides I play basketball and go to both school and work, what do you do besides being a worthless prick on newgrounds?

[Planet Hoppin]

Short and sweet

...no pun intended.

Though was expecting more from a contest entry.

Gerkinman responds:

Mine was one of the longer entries funnily enough.

[getting cola!]

Credit for effort

But that's all I can give you...

Preloader is difficult to navigate, unsure on whether that cat was the movie or the play button.

Video was too short, not a lot of effort put into it but you still get credit for some effort nonetheless.

I suggest a longer, more involved flash. Don't be frightened by working on it for long spans of time. You'll know you're ready to submit when you know there's nothing more you can do to it.

fifi91 responds:

thank you!

[::Roommates::]

Indeed

A good moral to stand by with your flatmates... roommates, what have you.

Good vid mate!

ViolentBuddha responds:

Thanx!:D