mohawkade's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Abrogation]

Should have saved this for Madness Day

Then it would have truly qualified for the prize.

[Lolli-Pop Man Chronicles]

Seems Rushed...

A unique concept that stands out amongst the random anime and stick figure battles. Looks a bit rushed though (and understandingly so if it's for a college project).

I suggest some ambiance background sounds and some better quality sound effects.

freesound.org offers a wide variety of sounds of varying qualities that you can browse through.

[Deliverance ep. 2]

Good animation...

Will suggest using the occasional motion tween with your lip syncing for a more fluid look, and maybe lowering the sensitivity of your microphone then increasing the volume in post-production to minimize the buzzing. If subtitles weren't in place, this movie would've been hard to follow.

Otherwise, I'm always ecstatic to see an decently animated movie with unique dialogue!

PParreira responds:

yeah I know, Anya's voice clips (girl in purple) were a bit too loud for the mic to handle, buit asked my voice actress to take it easy so that the same mistake wont happen.

[Megatron vs Starscream]

Ah Stop Motion...

Though kinda cheesy and I imagine the dialogue is from an old cartoon. I do appreciate a good stop-motion animation, in some ways it is much more challenging and time consuming than a flash.

Boomation responds:

I've practiced with Flash before and in my opinion, they're about as difficult to make as one another, just stop-motion is a little more time consuming. Thanks for the review!

[Pokemon But With Animals2]

Though the art isn't there

...the Humor and Dialogue make up for this by far! Good work mate and don't lose the charm you've put into these!

I will most certainly be showing this video off to a few of my more nerdy friends.

[Dance Mat - Stop-motion]

A refreshing animation

My only negative criticism about this is that it could use a preloader, otherwise this was very well done!

KERRUPT responds:

Hi mohawkade. Unfortuantely as a stop-motion animator I'm not really very familiar with Flash and struggled to trying to put a preloader in. Will be looking into it again today though and will hopefully figure it out in time for my next submission. Thanks for the feedback though and the positive review - it's greatly appreciated. :o)

[Relationships]

GoAnimate...

...is a program for talentless, unimaginative slobs.

M18 responds:

And you are whats known as a dick, besides I play basketball and go to both school and work, what do you do besides being a worthless prick on newgrounds?