I was expecting the worst from the artstyle, but the humor and animation really made up for this in great strides. Good work!
I was expecting the worst from the artstyle, but the humor and animation really made up for this in great strides. Good work!
This is Excellent work!
Thank you for making this, I grow wery of PewDiePie's content...
At first I was like, oooh, another Slender animation... I wonder if this will top mine?
Then I was like, "how did this get the front page?"
*First of all, no preloader (which is easy to add), hearing this loop while typing this review is getting mildly irritating.
*2nd, bad sound, needs more sound effects and some background ambiance, you can get better soundfx at freesound.org to use and mix them with others for better effect.
*As you'll soon find out, the shortness of this will be hated upon, as newgrounders would prefer to see longer cartoons with some sort of story-substance.
The humor is a total miss for me, the animation is "meh"
Overall, fair try. If you wish to get serious on animation on NG, analyze other good submitting and try to mimic the mood they set, the "cinematography", and so forth.
Half a star for the effort, I'm not even going to comment on how terrible this is.
Lo Siento, me no gusto.
Te voy a dar 2 por esfuerzo. Necesita un preloader con este.
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