mohawkade's Reviews

[Horrortale- Ketchup Stains]

This is well done.

[Chilling with your A.I. homie]

Great as always

[Potato Gun]

There is seriously a lack of stop motion animation on this site, thanks for contributing.

[Pico Sim Date <3]

This has got a pretty solid foundation & polishing on it, since you're taking feedback, here are some suggestions I have that (if feasible) could make this game legendary and keep players coming back again and again.

1) I think some more musical variety between day & night as well as a unique song for each unique location would be beneficial. Not to mention background ambient noise to complement each environment.

2) Mayhaps seeing some VAs to give voices to the different characters.

3) For each time the player works a Job or Career bit, see if it's possible to turn those into fun little mini-games (kinda like the date mini-game). Perhaps simple knock-offs of old arcade games; how well you play determines your final payout percentage.

4) And speaking of the Dating Mini-Game, it's pretty solid. But to add a degree of challenge, perhaps with each new level, add a new series of question/answers the player has to memorize as they advance.

5) Finally for every date success & end game proposal, perhaps have a quick tweened graphic of the two characters closing in for the kiss before fading to the "success" text, same goes for the end with a tweened graphic of Pico on his knee presenting the ring to the girl of his choice.

Just know that these are things I'd like to see out of this, but if you don't like these ideas or you don't think you can make it work out, I wouldn't be offended if you didn't consider them.

Otherwise, this is a stellar game so far. And I'd be ecstatic to see what the full version has to offer. And if you need a hand on polishing up some art, animation or sound mixing within the game, I'd gladly lend you guys a hand if you feel it's needed.

[Proximity: The Game]

Was this perhaps inspired by the Short film of the same title by Triune Films (Ryan Connolly)

TalkSickGames responds:

We got to know about the short film when a NG dude said something about it! We were shocked and surprised to see the resemblance!

[MLP: AJ POV Hentai]

...do people really fap to MLP?

Kajio responds:

Erryday, mo'sakra

[All Kings Must Die]

Bro, this is bombastic! I love it!

[Synthetic [Epic Sci-Fi Trailer Music]]

In a website full of amateur and semi-contestable music, your work is always one of those hidden gems on this site. Keep up the great work. I may be looking to you and your work for an animated passion project!

EvilRaccoon responds:

Thank you very much Mohakade! That is a fantastic complement. Hit me up whenever you are interested in a filmscore. All the best!

[Sunshine (Cover)]

This is probably the best remix of Adagio in D Minor I've ever heard! Mad kudos mate!

EvilRaccoon responds:

Thank you very much! :D

[The One-Cheesed Cracker]

I love everything about this!

[egg]

I crushed that egg, then I turned to the camera and said, "the yolk's on you"

[Freedom]

This has a haunting similarity to the title image of the Russian indie game "The Void" a.k.a "Tension"

See link for example...
http://www.mobygames.com/images/covers/l/162723-the-void-windows-others.jpg

It's good work nonetheless, but due to the similarities I've finding myself judging this with a bit of bias and comparing the two images.